Looking outside the train window
Whilst adjusting her bow
Staring and dreaming through the chugging lull of the train
Praying nobody sees through her pain.
Inspired by today’s
Prompt
Faraway
06 Wednesday Apr 2016
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This was a beautiful write. My favorite from you. Good work. I hope the heroine’s pain goes away.
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Thanks, Author! Smiles wide.
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I really loved this one. Great job. You should do more of these.
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Smiling
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Or, if it were a dirty old UK train you splendid poem could end, ‘Praying she could see through the pane’!
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Bwahahahha!!!! That is a funny twist! Thanks for wiping the pain away!
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Glad to help!
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Great one for today. I like Mike’s suggestion.
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I know, me too! It’s something that I think YOU’d probably come up with, yeah?
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Yes, probably why Mike and I get along so well…although he did steal my comment there…
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When he made the comment, you’re the one who actually has that style! Haha! That is so awesome!
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Thanks Maida!
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Incredible!
I started blogging this month, and it is a pleasure that I came across your blog.
It has inspired me to start my third article.
Thank you:)
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Who knew my blog could inspire? 😀
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